Arguments analyzed

I analyzed the argument "should the Obama generation drop out?" The tone of the argument feels informal, but doesn't seem to work with the subject he is arguing for. The author tries to target a broad audience from those in college to those already with a bachelors. This makes it lose the personal feel when his argument is based on being personal problems. When the author uses a percentage to bolster his argument he fails due to the percentage range being to big. This made him lose credibility and hampered any future evidence he brings up.